Sunday, February 16, 2025

Script

 Up next is our script! My group and I decided it would be best to start by writing a script. The script allows us to put all our ideas down on paper while working through visual scenes along the way. For example, if you don't like one of your shot choices or ideas, you still have the freedom to change it visually. Since the script mainly focuses on the character's dialogue, the visual aspect is left for the storyboard..

INT. HIGH SCHOOL GYM - EVENING


(OPENING CREDITS ROLL OVER GYM FOOTAGE)


FADE IN AS SFX: faint bouncing basketball, shoes screeching, heavy breathing


JD stands at the top of the key, dribbling, focused.


Opponent crouched low, watching his hips.


JD [VO]


This moment. It's the kind you dream about. A single shot. Win or lose. Everything slows down. Every breath, every step, calculated. It's do or die.


He shifts left then right, testing his defender.


JD [VO]


You tell yourself it's just another shot. But that's a lie.


Explodes into a quick crossover. Dribbles between the legs.


Defender bites. JD steps back, separates.


SFX: Heartbeat thumps


SLOW MOTION: He rises. Shoots. Perfect form, release, arc.


LONG SHOT SLOW MOTION: Ball completely misses the hoop.


Silence, then:


PLAYER 1


Yo, was that a lob?


PLAYER 2


Nah, that was a prayer.


COACH MARCUS


Davis, you tryna take out a bird?


JD just stands there.



LONG SHOT REVEALS THIS WAS JUST A 2 ON 2 PRACTICE


CUT TO:


INT. COACH'S OFFICE - LATER


Coach Marcus leans back, arms crossed.

2.



JD slouches.


COACH MARCUS


Let me guess. You thought that was going in.


JD


I knew it was going in Coach.


COACH MARCUS

Confidence is good. But delusion?

That's another story.


JD


I just... I gotta get better. Jason was -


COACH MARCUS


Jason ain't you. You ain't him.


COACH MARCUS (CONT'D) But hey, keep throwing bricks like that, and maybe we can build a new gym.


JD forces a laugh but it stings.


CUT TO:


INT. JD'S BASKETBALL THEMED BEDROOM - NIGHT


SFX: DIEGETIC SOUND OF CRICKETS CHIRPING, WINDOW OPEN


JD stares at a framed photo on his nightstand - him and his older brother (Jason Davis, college basketball star)


SFX: KNOCK ON DOOR, CREAKS OPEN


MOM (O.S.)


You'll be late for school again if you don't sleep.


JD doesn't answer.


MOM (CONT'D)


You don't have to be Jason, baby.


JD finally looks at her. Nods.


JD


Yeah, I know.


He turns away and looks at the ceiling again.

3.



Mom watches him for a moment, then turns off the light in his room.


CLOSE UP: JD's face in the dark.


His eyes don't close.


TITLE: AIRBALL (NO COPYRIGHT RAP PLAYS)


INT. HIGH SCHOOL WEIGHTLIFTING GYM - MORNING


Music revealed to be diegetic from his headphones/speaker.


JD alone, training.


CLOSE UP: Sweat drips


CLOSE UP: Legs shaking during squats


SFX: Diegetic music pauses.


JD sits on the bench between sets, resting, scrolling through Jason's old highlight reels.


He exhales, locks the phone, and stands back up.


SFX: Diegetic music resumes. Back to work.


CLOSE UP: Struggling with bench press


WIDE SHOT: Reveals empty bar


THE END

If you want to see the script click here! 

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